That is a really good poem. The only thing about that is the lines were in a wierd format. It was confusing because you couldn't really tell where the lines seperated. Maybe make the picture smaller then the lines will be seperated better. Other wise that was a good peom. Nice Job!
I like how you show the seasons as a clear cycle of life. You took an easy topic, the seasons, and made their cycle into a cycle of life, so you could've added onto it. Great job!
You had a really cool meaning behind this entry -- the seasons representing the life cycle. I agree with Angela though that the line spacing was kindof akward so you couldn't tell where they seperated but other than that great job! :)
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That is a really good poem. The only thing about that is the lines were in a wierd format. It was confusing because you couldn't really tell where the lines seperated. Maybe make the picture smaller then the lines will be seperated better. Other wise that was a good peom. Nice Job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you show the seasons as a clear cycle of life. You took an easy topic, the seasons, and made their cycle into a cycle of life, so you could've added onto it. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYou had a really cool meaning behind this entry -- the seasons representing the life cycle. I agree with Angela though that the line spacing was kindof akward so you couldn't tell where they seperated but other than that great job! :)
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